One of my friends actually got banned from uploading any sort of content just because they remixed a song but nobody could tell that it was remixed because it sounded the exact same as the song. I suggest that if you remix a song, actually make it noticeable. I found the original song on Soundcloud and both of these sound almost the same. However, after taking a closer listen, I could tell that you added some more reverb and used the HP filter to open the audio more and not make it sound so, cloggy, if that's how you want to put it.
Do be careful when remixing another's audio, because they might have copyright over it and give you a copyright strike for not asking for permission (I'm not enforcing that you didn't ask, I'm just saying.) Just a little heads up for your account and its ability to publish content.